08-02-2010, 11:34 PM
I know you changed the pose since I edited it, but, here is a quick edit that I believe hits on most of the things 1up was saying (correct me if I'm wrong).
Also in this edit, I made the fire a little more robust, I didn't think your fire looked quite right, but maybe thats just me.
Also in this edit, I made the fire a little more robust, I didn't think your fire looked quite right, but maybe thats just me.
![[Image: cyndasketchedit.png]](http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s195/Nindotendofreak/cyndasketchedit.png)