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A Journey to the Center of Spriting (Eventually[Maybe])
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The main problem with the sprite, from what I see, is the anatomy.

[Image: 2rxtfcx.png]

I drew a stick figure over what you sprited, and circled the three points that should be changed. His right leg, our left, needs its knee to be bent a little, should be pretty simple to fix. =]

The next is his left arm, our right. I think the hand and wrist positions are awkward, and should be more straight out than up. Though, I suppose it's fine, just a personal preference.

The other leg bends and then ends with the ankle and foot going at a 90 degree angle. Either the angle of the foot or the slope of the leg should be adjusted.

Additionally, the helmet shows a lightsource to the top right, the shirt should reflect that, along with the wrinkles. Also, you should add another color to the pants to shade them accordingly. Unless your style is to use one color, then you should remove the second shade in the helmet, skin, etc.

All in all, I think this is a really good sprite, man. =] With a few adjustments it could be really good.
Thanked by: Nindo, Cobalt Blue


Messages In This Thread
RE: Comrade Atari - by Vipershark - 08-03-2010, 07:17 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Link - 08-03-2010, 08:09 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Nindo - 08-03-2010, 11:16 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Vipershark - 08-03-2010, 11:23 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Cobalt Blue - 08-03-2010, 11:24 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Nindo - 08-04-2010, 05:44 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Vipershark - 08-04-2010, 07:00 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Link - 08-04-2010, 07:27 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by PJAMA - 08-05-2010, 10:53 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by triptych - 08-05-2010, 11:02 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by triptych - 08-04-2010, 08:08 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Nindo - 08-05-2010, 05:58 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by triptych - 08-05-2010, 06:00 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Nindo - 08-05-2010, 09:08 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Gors - 08-05-2010, 10:55 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Maxpphire - 08-05-2010, 10:57 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Nindo - 08-08-2010, 04:32 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Gors - 08-11-2010, 09:05 AM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Nindo - 08-11-2010, 10:43 AM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Nindo - 08-27-2010, 11:43 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Iceman404 - 08-28-2010, 12:07 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Nindo - 08-28-2010, 12:12 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Iceman404 - 08-28-2010, 12:15 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by StarSock64 - 08-28-2010, 12:17 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Gors - 08-28-2010, 12:42 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Nindo - 08-28-2010, 02:10 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Nindo - 08-31-2010, 04:20 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Iceman404 - 08-31-2010, 08:41 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Nindo - 10-06-2010, 05:48 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 10-06-2010, 06:01 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Nindo - 10-10-2010, 01:32 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 10-10-2010, 01:56 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Nindo - 10-10-2010, 07:31 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Nindo - 10-16-2010, 02:14 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Iceman404 - 10-16-2010, 02:48 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Nindo - 10-16-2010, 03:42 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Vipershark - 10-17-2010, 03:30 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by StarSock64 - 10-17-2010, 03:52 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Nindo - 10-17-2010, 06:12 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Nindo - 10-17-2010, 08:35 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Vipershark - 10-18-2010, 12:17 PM
RE: Comrade Atari - by Nindo - 10-18-2010, 12:40 PM
It's that bearded fellow! - by Nindo - 09-12-2010, 10:09 AM
RE: It's that bearded fellow! - by DadNier - 09-12-2010, 10:44 AM

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