The anatomy is a lot better now, you did a good job. =]
I think the next part to make it better would be to up the contrast between your colors, and maybe move around the shading just a tiny bit in some places.
I made a quick edit (I'm supposed to be doing summer work so it was really quick)
It's definitely far from perfect, but it should give you an idea. Since you use two colors per part, the shades should differ more from each other. Especially in the pants; the blues you chose blend too well together.
I didn't really do it well, but check this tutorial, it'll be helpful.
Good job on this, dude. =]
I think the next part to make it better would be to up the contrast between your colors, and maybe move around the shading just a tiny bit in some places.
I made a quick edit (I'm supposed to be doing summer work so it was really quick)
It's definitely far from perfect, but it should give you an idea. Since you use two colors per part, the shades should differ more from each other. Especially in the pants; the blues you chose blend too well together.
I didn't really do it well, but check this tutorial, it'll be helpful.
Good job on this, dude. =]