09-11-2008, 05:47 PM
Here is all the C+C I can give,
1. The shoes are a bit sketchy, try to make it smooth, and the light source a little more at the edge.
Also some of the other parts of the lineart look kind of sketchy, fix that.
2. The Overworld dress is pillowed on both sides, and the hat looks jagged at the top, add some shading.
3. Last thing, a little more contrast on the yellow shading.
Overall SGG, this sprite is a Home_Run! Your AA is good, your colors are perfect, the yellow just needs contrast, and im definitely using this for my game! Great Job, im looking forward to seeing this completed! Fix those things, and we will see where you stand!
1. The shoes are a bit sketchy, try to make it smooth, and the light source a little more at the edge.
Also some of the other parts of the lineart look kind of sketchy, fix that.
2. The Overworld dress is pillowed on both sides, and the hat looks jagged at the top, add some shading.
3. Last thing, a little more contrast on the yellow shading.
Overall SGG, this sprite is a Home_Run! Your AA is good, your colors are perfect, the yellow just needs contrast, and im definitely using this for my game! Great Job, im looking forward to seeing this completed! Fix those things, and we will see where you stand!