Overti- Oh wait, wrong one.
On Finn, I think you should probably put in a bit more contrast between his... hat?... and his face. Right now, they blend together a bit much.
Otherwise, I can't think of any other crits for it, but it still looks like it could use just a bit more work.
The girl thing looks okay so far. I'm not sure if you want AA in it, but I don't see anything wrong with it.
On Finn, I think you should probably put in a bit more contrast between his... hat?... and his face. Right now, they blend together a bit much.
Otherwise, I can't think of any other crits for it, but it still looks like it could use just a bit more work.
The girl thing looks okay so far. I'm not sure if you want AA in it, but I don't see anything wrong with it.