08-15-2010, 01:57 PM
@Kylegor, the composition is bad. Try to sketch out a better shape for him to be in (on paper, or just a larger drawing)
Then, try to match the shape and then fix shading. He is in an unnatural pose and incorrect proportions. Not saying you aren't capable of a good one, just that little tweaks will not fix this.
Then, try to match the shape and then fix shading. He is in an unnatural pose and incorrect proportions. Not saying you aren't capable of a good one, just that little tweaks will not fix this.