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8 Tailed Beast
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(08-25-2010, 03:15 PM)Nicodemus Wrote: It looks like its made out of wood


...really really red wood.
really really red and pillowed wood.

(08-25-2010, 03:17 PM)Keoto Wrote: i'll fix how about the sprite itself?

well, the lack of proper anatomy, blocky lineart, pillowshading, unfitting eye and teeth all contributes your work to look bad. The eye and teeth don't look beast-like (you might want to make the eye more elongated instead of a circle, and add pointy teeth instead of square, even ones).

Also the colors are crap. Nico didn't mean to completely change the beast's color from red to blue, for example. You just need to find a better red.
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8 Tailed Beast - by Keoto - 08-25-2010, 02:37 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Gors - 08-25-2010, 02:59 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by 2+D - 08-25-2010, 03:03 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Nindo - 08-25-2010, 03:15 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Keoto - 08-25-2010, 03:17 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by triptych - 08-25-2010, 03:19 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Keoto - 08-25-2010, 03:21 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Gors - 08-25-2010, 03:22 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by triptych - 08-25-2010, 03:24 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Keoto - 08-25-2010, 03:24 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by triptych - 08-25-2010, 03:25 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Gors - 08-25-2010, 03:30 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Cobalt Blue - 08-25-2010, 05:23 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Vipershark - 08-25-2010, 06:04 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by DioShiba - 08-25-2010, 06:22 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by triptych - 08-25-2010, 06:12 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by triptych - 08-25-2010, 06:44 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Keoto - 08-25-2010, 06:52 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by DioShiba - 08-25-2010, 06:58 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Keoto - 08-25-2010, 07:01 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by StarSock64 - 08-25-2010, 07:49 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Kairos - 08-25-2010, 08:43 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by triptych - 08-25-2010, 08:18 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Kairos - 08-25-2010, 08:21 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by StarSock64 - 08-25-2010, 08:30 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Vipershark - 08-25-2010, 08:33 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by triptych - 08-25-2010, 08:42 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by StarSock64 - 08-25-2010, 08:46 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Maneko - 08-25-2010, 09:05 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Keoto - 08-25-2010, 09:15 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by StarSock64 - 08-25-2010, 09:22 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Keoto - 08-25-2010, 09:43 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by StarSock64 - 08-25-2010, 09:56 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by triptych - 08-25-2010, 09:50 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Keoto - 08-25-2010, 09:53 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by triptych - 08-25-2010, 09:54 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Keoto - 08-25-2010, 09:57 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Maneko - 08-25-2010, 09:58 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Nindo - 08-25-2010, 09:59 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by StarSock64 - 08-25-2010, 10:00 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by triptych - 08-25-2010, 10:00 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by DioShiba - 08-26-2010, 09:34 AM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Keoto - 08-25-2010, 10:00 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by triptych - 08-25-2010, 10:03 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Cobalt Blue - 08-25-2010, 10:25 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Keoto - 08-25-2010, 10:29 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Cobalt Blue - 08-25-2010, 10:34 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Maneko - 08-25-2010, 11:13 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Cobalt Blue - 08-25-2010, 11:26 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Shoda - 08-26-2010, 12:40 AM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Gors - 08-26-2010, 07:51 AM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by 2+D - 08-26-2010, 01:32 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by triptych - 08-26-2010, 01:39 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Cobalt Blue - 08-26-2010, 07:31 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Maxpphire - 08-26-2010, 02:40 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Maxpphire - 08-28-2010, 09:34 PM
RE: 8 Tailed Beast - by Cobalt Blue - 08-28-2010, 09:52 PM

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