08-26-2010, 11:27 AM
Outline version looks kinda... wrong. The character is probably small enough for you to go Castlevania-style, and remove the facial features as a design choice. He'd look alright with just the 'scary shiny glasses'.
You're also suffering from pillowshading quite a bit. For all your 'detail', the highlights do nothing to show clothing folds.
You're also suffering from pillowshading quite a bit. For all your 'detail', the highlights do nothing to show clothing folds.