Generic Pokemon Fisherman

[Nindo]

I'm not getting the perspective you are going for.
The hat suggests a partially frontal view, while the face suggests a side view.
His left foot is out of perspective with his left leg (the viewer's right).

Also, you've got some major depth issues going on here, mostly caused by the improper shading.
I really can't tell whats going on with those pants, they look like they are caving inward because of the way you are attempting to shade-define his legs.

Also, I assume you are trying to portray that he has his shirt tucked in, because if not, that shirt is way out of whack. Even if it is tucked in, it still looks a bit weird, the shirt-line is curving up too much.

I think bringing the shirt down in the middle just one or two pixels would go a long way to start fixing these problems. Make his left foot (our right) point more towards the viewer. To fix the head in this view, move the exist eye to the right (his left) one pixel length and add a smaller eye on the far left of his head (his right).

Thats probably not everything, but thats all I've got so far.

EDIT:
Now that I've looked at it fully zoomed, I see there actually are two eyes. My mistake, though his left eye (our right) still needs to be movied over on his face so that the perspective is better.