08-29-2010, 12:18 PM
You've basically changed bothing major aside from the palette of the trousers.
- The head is still looking in a different direction to the body. I would suggest changing the angle of the head so it waces towards us more.
- The waist of the trousers is too high - making it look like he has this massively tall crotch area. Make his shirt longer, and detail and actual top to the trousers instead of them just 'ending' like that.
- He still has his feet splayed outwards from eachother way too far, making him look awkward. The shape of his right foot doesn't match his left, and the way you've only shaded one of them makes it look like they're made of different materials.
You have quite a ways to go.
- The head is still looking in a different direction to the body. I would suggest changing the angle of the head so it waces towards us more.
- The waist of the trousers is too high - making it look like he has this massively tall crotch area. Make his shirt longer, and detail and actual top to the trousers instead of them just 'ending' like that.
- He still has his feet splayed outwards from eachother way too far, making him look awkward. The shape of his right foot doesn't match his left, and the way you've only shaded one of them makes it look like they're made of different materials.
You have quite a ways to go.