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MAGICAL BOX LAND
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The bushes look somewhat stylistically out of place with their one color shading in comparison to the character sprites. The shading on the characters is a bit muddy and cluttered. The shading type on the characters only works well for the slime. With the penguins, the shading throws off the form of the wings, and with the girl, her body is a cylinder. I would evolve into kenneth shawn fejer and simplify or ease up on the character shading because the bush is the best. I still like it 9/10.
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MAGICAL BOX LAND - by Shawn - 09-01-2010, 07:54 PM
RE: MAGICAL BOX LAND - by Baegal - 09-01-2010, 08:02 PM
RE: MAGICAL BOX LAND - by Cobalt Blue - 09-01-2010, 11:03 PM
RE: MAGICAL BOX LAND - by CeeY - 09-02-2010, 12:15 AM
RE: MAGICAL BOX LAND - by Shawn - 09-02-2010, 09:20 AM
RE: MAGICAL BOX LAND - by Davy Jones - 09-02-2010, 03:07 AM
RE: MAGICAL BOX LAND - by DerZocker - 09-02-2010, 04:31 AM
RE: MAGICAL BOX LAND - by Gors - 09-02-2010, 06:43 AM
RE: MAGICAL BOX LAND - by Gors - 09-02-2010, 09:29 AM
RE: MAGICAL BOX LAND - by Davy Jones - 09-02-2010, 12:28 PM
RE: MAGICAL BOX LAND - by Gors - 09-02-2010, 12:55 PM
RE: MAGICAL BOX LAND - by Cobalt Blue - 09-02-2010, 10:44 PM
RE: MAGICAL BOX LAND - by triptych - 09-02-2010, 10:46 PM
RE: MAGICAL BOX LAND - by Gors - 09-02-2010, 11:00 PM
RE: MAGICAL BOX LAND - by water dog - 09-03-2010, 02:43 AM
RE: MAGICAL BOX LAND - by Shawn - 09-03-2010, 09:09 AM
RE: MAGICAL BOX LAND - by Gors - 09-03-2010, 09:32 AM
RE: MAGICAL BOX LAND - by thernz - 09-03-2010, 09:22 AM
RE: MAGICAL BOX LAND - by 2+D - 09-03-2010, 01:38 PM

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