09-05-2010, 05:38 PM
initially misread this as 'lords of thunder project' was happy. not happy.
2 things.
Like innocence, the stupid Baka Gaijin kabuki mono said, your lines are jagged an uneven. Your characters heads aren't shaped like actual heads, but like half eggs which is kind of weird. The buildings have no depth, or detail. The gate is actually kind of alright, but it needs a little more contrast.
2 things.
Like innocence, the stupid Baka Gaijin kabuki mono said, your lines are jagged an uneven. Your characters heads aren't shaped like actual heads, but like half eggs which is kind of weird. The buildings have no depth, or detail. The gate is actually kind of alright, but it needs a little more contrast.
![[Image: cKfiI0F.png]](http://i.imgur.com/cKfiI0F.png)