09-07-2010, 06:28 AM
Cute little sprites, I like the general feel you've got going on them.
My favourite part so far is probably the girl's pants, they really look nice and like actual jeans, the guy's jeans are fine too but harder to make out due to the darker shades.
Right now my biggest concern for these sprites is how they'd look on a background, I could easily imagine both of these blending in with BG colours much more than you'd actually want, so you might want to look into that.
As for any further comments:
1. on the guy's rightmost hand you have enough space to perhaps mildly try and define some fingers, right now it actually feels like an empty space, you can fill it more.
2. the back end of the female's hair is too sharp, you can make it a bit rounder near the top.
3. the girl's feet both seem to be placed a bit more to the right than I'd personally place em, makes it seem like she has super long flat feet, you might want to move both of them to the left 1 or 2 pixels.
I'm sure there's other stuff to point out, but these are the basic things I noticed.
Hope it helps.
My favourite part so far is probably the girl's pants, they really look nice and like actual jeans, the guy's jeans are fine too but harder to make out due to the darker shades.
Right now my biggest concern for these sprites is how they'd look on a background, I could easily imagine both of these blending in with BG colours much more than you'd actually want, so you might want to look into that.
As for any further comments:
1. on the guy's rightmost hand you have enough space to perhaps mildly try and define some fingers, right now it actually feels like an empty space, you can fill it more.
2. the back end of the female's hair is too sharp, you can make it a bit rounder near the top.
3. the girl's feet both seem to be placed a bit more to the right than I'd personally place em, makes it seem like she has super long flat feet, you might want to move both of them to the left 1 or 2 pixels.
I'm sure there's other stuff to point out, but these are the basic things I noticed.
Hope it helps.
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