TUGS - Round 1 - Intermediate WIP Thread

[JoshR691]

That is so kick ass, but I wanna help you get even more kick ass.
I can't tell much, but you should make the clouds a bit more longer in width, try to browse pictures of drawn clouds, you'll see what i mean. So, kinda give them a little "trail" .
Maybe try to get rid of the last sky shade, since it's a bit too dark for a day sky, and if you try looking up the sky , the sky is always uni-coloured, except near the surface. Lastly, try to add a, white, 1 pixel thin, line to give the spaceships a bit more shine. example: Mouse ship from Kirby and Masked Dedede
Have you already tried to use some anti aliasing on the spaceship's shines? If you're keeping it colour limited, then don't worry about what I said

keep going Joshr, your entry was really the clean quality from your customs i expected of you and you're doing even better : D

Okay, I think I see what you were saying:



My Ramblings on what I did:

Spoiler

I decided to leave the Darkest Shade for the Sky, but make it so it's, more or less, just the dithering...I gave the Clouds Trails (Or did you mean just Stretch out the entire Cloud?), And I completely re-shaded the ships, and I think it looks better than the old shading...And I also added a lighter white, not only for the shine on the Ships, but for the Clouds as well (Why make a new shade and not use it?), And While I was at it, I fixed other shading errors that I just happened to notice...Yes, I know I'm rambling now

I'm really liking all of the Other Entries, you guys are doing a great job

Edit: Fixing up everything everyone mentioned (Especially the half-assed clouds, as well as trying to make the Tractor beam look more tube-like [to show that it's actually surrounding the rocks they're carrying])