09-07-2010, 09:26 PM
well, the first thing we could even criticize and give feed back is
anatomy.
its all fucked up in so many levels that i'd strongly suggest that you read this. and actually not because i'm telling you your shit is ugly, but because i'm asuming you're interested in improving your skills and to actually make characters that are appealing to someone else besides your uncle jeff(sic), not to mention characters that actually look and feel human-like.
go easy, start with simple characters, then develop over more advanced poses and so on. this ain't simple or fast, but judging from where you are now, its either stick to your ship and sink miserably or start anew as if nothing happened before.
anatomy.
its all fucked up in so many levels that i'd strongly suggest that you read this. and actually not because i'm telling you your shit is ugly, but because i'm asuming you're interested in improving your skills and to actually make characters that are appealing to someone else besides your uncle jeff(sic), not to mention characters that actually look and feel human-like.
go easy, start with simple characters, then develop over more advanced poses and so on. this ain't simple or fast, but judging from where you are now, its either stick to your ship and sink miserably or start anew as if nothing happened before.