well you took blunt criticism without crying or throwing a fit so i have hope for you yet, mr. oddish
so as a reward I'm gonna try to help you out as much as I can
![[Image: extensivecrit1.png]](http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v413/Super_Saiya-Jin/extensivecrit1.png)
and as for the spheres, most of them aren't perfect but I didn't feel like going in-depth with each of them (although some are actually pretty good, like the first on the left in the second row), but the biggest one that was easy to show something was the final, "grey" one
![[Image: extensivecrit2.png]](http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v413/Super_Saiya-Jin/extensivecrit2.png)
actual greys with literally zero saturation don't really occur in real life at all, and regardless of whether they do or not picking actual colors that are just CLOSE to gray (i.e. low saturation) looks much nicer, so, do that (I put an example of some "colorful grays" next to the sphere in question)
edit: i tweaked the colors a bit, hope you don't mind (on oddish's "skin")
edit #2: if you want i'll give you a good general guide on picking colors and making palettes at a later date
so as a reward I'm gonna try to help you out as much as I can
and as for the spheres, most of them aren't perfect but I didn't feel like going in-depth with each of them (although some are actually pretty good, like the first on the left in the second row), but the biggest one that was easy to show something was the final, "grey" one
actual greys with literally zero saturation don't really occur in real life at all, and regardless of whether they do or not picking actual colors that are just CLOSE to gray (i.e. low saturation) looks much nicer, so, do that (I put an example of some "colorful grays" next to the sphere in question)
edit: i tweaked the colors a bit, hope you don't mind (on oddish's "skin")
edit #2: if you want i'll give you a good general guide on picking colors and making palettes at a later date