09-08-2010, 09:08 AM
(09-04-2010, 11:39 AM)Kaikimi Wrote:(09-04-2010, 09:49 AM)Gors Wrote: contrast, anatomy, use less colors
Be more specific
Some of the colors feel washed out overall; increasing it a lil' more, especially in the hair shades, might be interesting.
The anatomy is completely f'ed up, I suggest starting over, but this time with a sketch first. A problem that I had when I was starting pixelling is that I didn't make a whole sketch before making the actual piece. Learning to sketch first will hlp you a lot.
Some colors can be ditched because of the lack of contrast. Pixelart is a type of art that you use less colors; cramming a lot of colors as possible in a small sprite clearly isn't a smart thing to do.
Neorice Wrote:I almost find the enlongated head shape a bit cuteIt's okay
but it's good to remember that this distortion happened because the artist made a mistake, and not by stylistical choices. Just pointing this out because some people like to hide in the 'this is my style, it's supposed to look horrible like this' excuse.