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(09-04-2010, 11:39 AM)Kaikimi Wrote:
(09-04-2010, 09:49 AM)Gors Wrote: contrast, anatomy, use less colors

Be more specific

Some of the colors feel washed out overall; increasing it a lil' more, especially in the hair shades, might be interesting.

The anatomy is completely f'ed up, I suggest starting over, but this time with a sketch first. A problem that I had when I was starting pixelling is that I didn't make a whole sketch before making the actual piece. Learning to sketch first will hlp you a lot.

Some colors can be ditched because of the lack of contrast. Pixelart is a type of art that you use less colors; cramming a lot of colors as possible in a small sprite clearly isn't a smart thing to do.
Neorice Wrote:I almost find the enlongated head shape a bit cute
It's okay

but it's good to remember that this distortion happened because the artist made a mistake, and not by stylistical choices. Just pointing this out because some people like to hide in the 'this is my style, it's supposed to look horrible like this' excuse.
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Humanoid - by awktupus - 09-03-2010, 11:06 PM
RE: Humanoid - by StarSock64 - 09-03-2010, 11:15 PM
RE: Humanoid - by Hoeloe - 09-09-2010, 04:53 PM
RE: Humanoid - by Iceman404 - 09-03-2010, 11:22 PM
RE: Humanoid - by Gors - 09-04-2010, 09:49 AM
RE: Humanoid - by Codestar - 09-04-2010, 11:39 AM
RE: Humanoid - by triptych - 09-04-2010, 10:50 AM
RE: Humanoid - by BobbyLala - 09-04-2010, 12:04 PM
RE: Humanoid - by Nindo - 09-07-2010, 02:45 PM
RE: Humanoid - by Alternate Eevee - 09-07-2010, 02:53 PM
RE: Humanoid - by Neoriceisgood - 09-08-2010, 05:25 AM
RE: Humanoid - by Gors - 09-08-2010, 09:08 AM
RE: Humanoid - by Gors - 09-10-2010, 07:28 AM

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