Users browsing this thread: 3 Guest(s)
Ocean Monolith
#1
Maybe some of you already saw this on PJ or dA or something, but I wanted a little bit of feedback.

[Image: GrayingTowerAloneOnTheSea.png]

It's a black obelisk/monolith thing rising from a stormy ocean. I'm proud of this piece but am interested to hear any of your thoughts. I probably won't do any major changes on this piece, but I can apply any advice to the future, so please, do help.

I like the water, am surprised I even got the light & tower this good, and am not hugely happy with the sky.
If you're interested: Original Sharpie Sketch I Did, WIP Animation

EDIT: Oops, forgot to say, 22 colors, I know two light blues are quite close, but I couldn't find a great median color. If you have a suggestion for this color, I'd like to hear it.
[Image: Altered_photo1_sig.png]
My crit posts tend to make me look arrogant if read the wrong way. That is not my intention. I am open to discussing anything you disagree with, so please do.
Thanked by: Iceman404, ThePortalGuru


Messages In This Thread
Ocean Monolith - by Ego - 09-09-2010, 05:28 PM
RE: Ocean Monolith - by GrooveMan.exe - 09-09-2010, 05:37 PM
RE: Ocean Monolith - by Davy Jones - 09-09-2010, 05:48 PM
RE: Ocean Monolith - by Proton - 09-09-2010, 06:10 PM
RE: Ocean Monolith - by Ego - 09-09-2010, 06:04 PM
RE: Ocean Monolith - by GrooveMan.exe - 09-11-2010, 08:55 PM
RE: Ocean Monolith - by Davy Jones - 09-09-2010, 06:42 PM
RE: Ocean Monolith - by Badassbill - 09-09-2010, 06:49 PM
RE: Ocean Monolith - by Ego - 09-09-2010, 09:48 PM
RE: Ocean Monolith - by Gors - 09-10-2010, 07:22 AM
RE: Ocean Monolith - by triptych - 09-10-2010, 02:54 PM
RE: Ocean Monolith - by Ego - 09-10-2010, 06:20 PM
RE: Ocean Monolith - by Ego - 09-11-2010, 10:49 PM

Forum Jump: