[art][wip] Beauty queen etna v20000 (crits plz)

[Ashura]

So yeah, after spending 14 hours on drawing a really bad etna picture in 2009, I wanted to spend the same amount of time drawing a half-decent etna pic

Here's what I have so far. Anything wrong with the anatomy/coloring/proportions? I fixed the noticeable errors before coloring this picture, but I've become blinded after spending so long coloring this. There might be more mistakes I have missed.. feel free to be as harsh as possible



I'll update this thread with new revisions

anyways feel free to C+C, im exhausted

(the final version will have a better background)