09-26-2010, 05:35 AM
Waist needs to be thinner and so do her arms. She should also be a little taller, judging from the size of her head, it makes her look about 10, and not around 17: the age Mikuru should be. Proportions are off too. A good tip for body proportion is that a fully stretched leg should be the same length as the torso and the head together. Currently. her legs are far too short.
You're also using different angles for different areas of the sprite:
The feet are pointing directly forwards.
The head is tilted a tiny bit down.
The skirt is almost at a 45 degree angle to the screen.
If I were you, I'd go for a tiny bit downwards or a 45 degree angle rather than straight ahead. Directly forwards sprites are extremely difficult to do correctly, and almost always look horribly stiff.
You're also using different angles for different areas of the sprite:
The feet are pointing directly forwards.
The head is tilted a tiny bit down.
The skirt is almost at a 45 degree angle to the screen.
If I were you, I'd go for a tiny bit downwards or a 45 degree angle rather than straight ahead. Directly forwards sprites are extremely difficult to do correctly, and almost always look horribly stiff.
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