09-29-2010, 04:04 PM
Such heavy shading on b/w girl's hat suggests that the pink parts would be darker too, I think. The guy's hair is too dark to make out the lineart/details. I guess I'm okay with MC link but lttp link just looks like a dirtier version.
On the custom, the spine is curved really strangely. Your latest edit makes it a little better, but it's still an issue. I wouldn't even really call the actual air-humping the problem, things just aren't fitted on right somehow. I think it's the way the head and neck fit onto the body, or the curvature of the torso, wish I could be more certain/specific.
I extremely suggest adding AA on the legs, and I think the hair needs more volume in the back of the head.
On the custom, the spine is curved really strangely. Your latest edit makes it a little better, but it's still an issue. I wouldn't even really call the actual air-humping the problem, things just aren't fitted on right somehow. I think it's the way the head and neck fit onto the body, or the curvature of the torso, wish I could be more certain/specific.
I extremely suggest adding AA on the legs, and I think the hair needs more volume in the back of the head.
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