Proofreading and Suggestions please?

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Proofreading and Suggestions please?

Woppet*

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10-06-2010, 04:00 AM

'They Gamestation and the market for rare second hand gems.
This sentance doesn't make all that much sense to me?
Maybe it should be:
'They shop at Gamestation and the market for-'' ?

Anyway looks good.

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Proofreading and Suggestions please? - by GrooveMan.exe - 10-04-2010, 01:10 PM

RE: Proofreading and Suggestions please? - by Proton - 10-04-2010, 03:30 PM

RE: Proofreading and Suggestions please? - by RandomPerson78642 - 10-04-2010, 07:35 PM

RE: Proofreading and Suggestions please? - by Sol - 10-04-2010, 08:01 PM

RE: Proofreading and Suggestions please? - by GrooveMan.exe - 10-05-2010, 04:51 AM

RE: Proofreading and Suggestions please? - by Dazz - 10-05-2010, 04:59 PM

RE: Proofreading and Suggestions please? - by Woppet* - 10-06-2010, 04:00 AM

RE: Proofreading and Suggestions please? - by GrooveMan.exe - 10-06-2010, 06:09 AM

RE: Proofreading and Suggestions please? - by Dazz - 10-06-2010, 10:20 AM

RE: Proofreading and Suggestions please? - by GrooveMan.exe - 10-06-2010, 10:26 AM

RE: Proofreading and Suggestions please? - by RandomPerson78642 - 10-06-2010, 03:35 PM

RE: Proofreading and Suggestions please? - by Woppet* - 10-06-2010, 03:38 PM

RE: Proofreading and Suggestions please? - by Nindo - 10-06-2010, 05:53 PM

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