10-17-2010, 03:52 PM
(This post was last modified: 10-17-2010, 04:26 PM by StarSock64.)
Yeah, it seems like you have it in your mind that you have to shade around all your outlines but you really don't. Your lightsources aren't making any sense here, the hat seems to suggest top left but then the hand suggests otherwise and the face and shirt are pillowshaded. The mouth is also really jagged, I'd add another shade to the white and use the skin shades to smooth it out. I might try to make an example to show you but I wouldn't count on it with how I'm feeling right now~
![[Image: huphup.png]](http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/1967/huphup.png)
Oh look I did it after all. I did it pretty quick, but I hope it gives you an idea. I was going to redo the arm but I'm pretty confused about what it's supposed to be doing. The hand is sort of a blob and the arm lacks joints.
Oh look I did it after all. I did it pretty quick, but I hope it gives you an idea. I was going to redo the arm but I'm pretty confused about what it's supposed to be doing. The hand is sort of a blob and the arm lacks joints.
![[Image: sxv5uJR.gif]](http://i.imgur.com/cqpCy.gif)