a new type of packman?

[Gors]

Don't post things you know are obviously bad on the internet - make them good first.
You do not need advice for this - what changes need to be made are rather obvious.

That's pretty offensive. He's a starter, and needs advice. No teacher would say that to someone. Just because you know more things than him doesn't make you better.

Also if he made it good before posting, then the Sprite Discussion topic would be useless.