This needs to be finished, because this doesn't show the true skill of you two yet. Thus I am not impressed.
The boy's upper body is too large compared to his legs, nothing is exactly in proper proportion. The left-side arm is kind of weird, I think it can be shaped a litter better than that, especially if he's wearing a sweater the lower part of his arm shouldn't be that skinny, it looks like he has a large shoulder. His whole lower section is just too small, either that or you guys will need to heavily size down the upper body.
Now whatever shadow he's casting isn't exactly right either, neither is the lightsource. You have him almost in front of the rocks with his left side blocking its direction from where the light is glowing, but the light is still reflecting off the rocks??? The rocks should only have a tiny fragment of light on it, since they're behind the boy.
Now I know everything else is still in WIP, but the scenery should have some leaves flying around/falling since it's autumn in the piece. Because honestly if there's just gonna be leaves/trees done without anything else it might come out kind of boring. Right now only the lighting is what's adding depth to the image, so there should be other things going on in there to add more the atmosphere, those bird's won't add enough by themselves. Lastly I think the house can stick out a bit better, it doesn't really look mysterious or give off any vibe, it's just a simple house (that looks really cartoony) with the lights on from far away to me.
Aside those points this is setting up to look really great so far, and I can tell you two are putting a lot into this, and i swear if this isn't finished I will make my way to make sure both of you are dead. Just please look over those points I mentioned because there's a chance it can really hinder a lot in the piece.
The boy's upper body is too large compared to his legs, nothing is exactly in proper proportion. The left-side arm is kind of weird, I think it can be shaped a litter better than that, especially if he's wearing a sweater the lower part of his arm shouldn't be that skinny, it looks like he has a large shoulder. His whole lower section is just too small, either that or you guys will need to heavily size down the upper body.
Now whatever shadow he's casting isn't exactly right either, neither is the lightsource. You have him almost in front of the rocks with his left side blocking its direction from where the light is glowing, but the light is still reflecting off the rocks??? The rocks should only have a tiny fragment of light on it, since they're behind the boy.
Now I know everything else is still in WIP, but the scenery should have some leaves flying around/falling since it's autumn in the piece. Because honestly if there's just gonna be leaves/trees done without anything else it might come out kind of boring. Right now only the lighting is what's adding depth to the image, so there should be other things going on in there to add more the atmosphere, those bird's won't add enough by themselves. Lastly I think the house can stick out a bit better, it doesn't really look mysterious or give off any vibe, it's just a simple house (that looks really cartoony) with the lights on from far away to me.
Aside those points this is setting up to look really great so far, and I can tell you two are putting a lot into this, and i swear if this isn't finished I will make my way to make sure both of you are dead. Just please look over those points I mentioned because there's a chance it can really hinder a lot in the piece.