Continued~

[Nindo]

I agree with Metaru here, the nose especially looks out of perspective with the viewing angle that I am getting from the base skull, and out of proportion with the rest of her face, unless she has a pretty big nose. Also, her right eye (viewer's left) is showing too much. Again the perspective that I am getting from the base skull seems to suggest that I would see less of that eye, since her head appears to be turned. Either fix the face to reflect the perspective of the skull, or fix the skull to fit with the perspective of her facial features.

Really digging the hair, hat, and background. The ribbon is good too, just has a bit of pillow shading that needs to be touched up.