11-04-2010, 09:50 PM
Wowee your sig is too big and well, tbh sprite comics aren't good for your image around here. People here don't like them.
Sometimes where your ref doesn't have the feet at the same height, they're the same height in your version. It might help to show the lift.
Your colors need way more contrast and I don't like how your feet aren't outlined in black like the rest of the sprite. Your shading makes a weird kind of square in there or something...I don't know, increase the contrast so I can see it better and I'll try to be more specific. The head could be more tilted in some frames, and the hard angle in frames 3 and 4 doesn't look good
Sometimes where your ref doesn't have the feet at the same height, they're the same height in your version. It might help to show the lift.
Your colors need way more contrast and I don't like how your feet aren't outlined in black like the rest of the sprite. Your shading makes a weird kind of square in there or something...I don't know, increase the contrast so I can see it better and I'll try to be more specific. The head could be more tilted in some frames, and the hard angle in frames 3 and 4 doesn't look good