11-07-2010, 06:37 AM
i like this a lot, but the face looks quite blurred compared to the rest:this piece is still wip right?
you could change the pattern on the shirt according to the volume of her breasts just like the shading on them, but that depends if you want to emphasise on them or if you want to destroy the volume and emphasise on the pattern.
the aa could be better overall, like the top of the shirt, the hair near her shoulder and her left breast, and i think that it could do with reshading too, to have more curve and follow the flow of the hair. probably other things but yeah, i need to know your intentions in your work to be more helpful.
it's cool to see some more work of yours, especially as you've improved!
you could change the pattern on the shirt according to the volume of her breasts just like the shading on them, but that depends if you want to emphasise on them or if you want to destroy the volume and emphasise on the pattern.
the aa could be better overall, like the top of the shirt, the hair near her shoulder and her left breast, and i think that it could do with reshading too, to have more curve and follow the flow of the hair. probably other things but yeah, i need to know your intentions in your work to be more helpful.
it's cool to see some more work of yours, especially as you've improved!