Some Bixxvvtch

[GaryASPG]

The black outline on her left earring is bugging me considering all everything else has a pretty smooth transition and here in this earring is a black outline. And the broken outline of the arm. I just feel that the use of black is too strong for those.

can't believe i missed this, meant to fix that completely forgot hurrr

i like this a lot, but the face looks quite blurred compared to the rest:this piece is still wip right?
you could change the pattern on the shirt according to the volume of her breasts just like the shading on them, but that depends if you want to emphasise on them or if you want to destroy the volume and emphasise on the pattern.
the aa could be better overall, like the top of the shirt, the hair near her shoulder and her left breast, and i think that it could do with reshading too, to have more curve and follow the flow of the hair. probably other things but yeah, i need to know your intentions in your work to be more helpful.
it's cool to see some more work of yours, especially as you've improved!

yea its still pretty much WIP but there's nothing that's going to be added or anything it just needs improvements obv. obv.
tried to fix all that ~stuff~ except the shading on her face because the shading of her face is like that for a reason ok :CCC
got rid of that pattern though and just made it one solid color b/c that pattern really was teh gay
ps thnx



oh yeah and here's the fixez


e: ugh i tried getting rid of the black outline on the tits but it doesnt really work i dont think v________v



i dont know which one works better w/e !!!!

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