11-07-2010, 04:25 PM
In the first one, the goomba is kinda misshapen, and the top of the pipe looks flat, due to the way you shaded it. The bottom half of the pipe looks better.
I don't see much hue shifting in that second one. Also, there seems to be some banding around some things in it.
The third one, the slime thingies also look rough, and the hole in the building, especially the cracks surrounding it, don't look right.
The last one is, I think, the best one here, though it's not very interesting. You might wanna up the contrast on the door a bit.
I hope some of that was useful.
I don't see much hue shifting in that second one. Also, there seems to be some banding around some things in it.
The third one, the slime thingies also look rough, and the hole in the building, especially the cracks surrounding it, don't look right.
The last one is, I think, the best one here, though it's not very interesting. You might wanna up the contrast on the door a bit.
I hope some of that was useful.