I FIXED YO' BOOBS
and also messed with the hair some
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First thing, that I only noticed once I started the drawover: her shoulder's missing! You should be able to see at least the edge of it.
NOW ABOUT THE BREASTS. The main thing that's making them look saggy is the fact that the weight is mostly towards the bottom; that can happen in real life, but it's usually in older women. Breasts on younger women tend to be fuller and rounder. The little squiggles I drew on the side show what I'm talking about! The lines across them show where the main bulk starts. In the drawover I did much the same thing, so uh, without being crass, they're perkier.
I also knocked basically everything on the chest to the right by a few pixels; everything was kinda floating away from the ribcage a bit :V
I reshaped the hair because it's looking really geometric, and since you've got a more realistic (ish) style in the rest of the image, it looked sort of mismatched to me. If you went full on Panty&Stocking type pointy awesome, then that hair would look fine! But you're not, so it looks a bit stuck on.
The shape I gave it is pretty lacklustre, but with some tweaking I think it'd fit the style better! It's less abstract than you had, more going for exaggerated realism. I also pushed the bangs down; the little flicky bits you had on the side there didn't make much sense.
That bit's up to you though; feel free to absolutely ignore my draw-over there, but I would suggest curving the top of her hair more at least -- the rest of the hair looks really bouncy, but the very top looks pretty flat.
Part of the hair I really do suggest changing; the little tuft that's covering her neck makes it really hard to read where her neck is. Even if it's technically right, it's always going to look awkward when her neck's entirely obscured like that. If you make the curve a little shallower and just show the edge of the neck, it'll read less like her head's just kinda floating there.
Oh, ignore my drawing on the other shoulder, that looks dumb, I didn't finish it because you don't really need to change that at all :V
and also messed with the hair some
First thing, that I only noticed once I started the drawover: her shoulder's missing! You should be able to see at least the edge of it.
NOW ABOUT THE BREASTS. The main thing that's making them look saggy is the fact that the weight is mostly towards the bottom; that can happen in real life, but it's usually in older women. Breasts on younger women tend to be fuller and rounder. The little squiggles I drew on the side show what I'm talking about! The lines across them show where the main bulk starts. In the drawover I did much the same thing, so uh, without being crass, they're perkier.
I also knocked basically everything on the chest to the right by a few pixels; everything was kinda floating away from the ribcage a bit :V
I reshaped the hair because it's looking really geometric, and since you've got a more realistic (ish) style in the rest of the image, it looked sort of mismatched to me. If you went full on Panty&Stocking type pointy awesome, then that hair would look fine! But you're not, so it looks a bit stuck on.
The shape I gave it is pretty lacklustre, but with some tweaking I think it'd fit the style better! It's less abstract than you had, more going for exaggerated realism. I also pushed the bangs down; the little flicky bits you had on the side there didn't make much sense.
That bit's up to you though; feel free to absolutely ignore my draw-over there, but I would suggest curving the top of her hair more at least -- the rest of the hair looks really bouncy, but the very top looks pretty flat.
Part of the hair I really do suggest changing; the little tuft that's covering her neck makes it really hard to read where her neck is. Even if it's technically right, it's always going to look awkward when her neck's entirely obscured like that. If you make the curve a little shallower and just show the edge of the neck, it'll read less like her head's just kinda floating there.
Oh, ignore my drawing on the other shoulder, that looks dumb, I didn't finish it because you don't really need to change that at all :V
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