11-12-2010, 09:38 PM
Hello Luis.
First of all, go present yourself in "New Arrival/ Departures".
Right... for your hammer. It isn't balanced: the handle should be centred. The head conveys volume poorly, it does not look like the shape of a hammer's head and the "l" stands out too much in comparison.
It'd be nice if you commented your piece and told us what you want precisely, it would help a lot.
First of all, go present yourself in "New Arrival/ Departures".
Right... for your hammer. It isn't balanced: the handle should be centred. The head conveys volume poorly, it does not look like the shape of a hammer's head and the "l" stands out too much in comparison.
It'd be nice if you commented your piece and told us what you want precisely, it would help a lot.