I really like it, although I think her legs could be thinner (they should be slightly thicker than the arms)
I would shrink the raised hand by a lot, since it looks bigger than the other hand (even though perspective says otherwise)
also, the face needs some work
she has no chin right now. Even though she's a little girl, she must have a somewhat pointy chin. I'd put the center of the "v" shaped chin right under the nose (if anything, I'd redo the entire chin area to look pointier)
I'd redo the left eye. not only does it look lazy, it creates a tangent along the left side of the face, which looks severely flat thanks to the mistake. I'd add more pixels to the head's left side (to give more room to drawing the left eye correctly) to fix it
worst of all, the eyes are off-perspective right now. The eyes need to follow the head and the hat's perspective.. take a close look at these two pics
you should probably see how the eyes are off by now
I would shrink the raised hand by a lot, since it looks bigger than the other hand (even though perspective says otherwise)
also, the face needs some work
she has no chin right now. Even though she's a little girl, she must have a somewhat pointy chin. I'd put the center of the "v" shaped chin right under the nose (if anything, I'd redo the entire chin area to look pointier)
I'd redo the left eye. not only does it look lazy, it creates a tangent along the left side of the face, which looks severely flat thanks to the mistake. I'd add more pixels to the head's left side (to give more room to drawing the left eye correctly) to fix it
worst of all, the eyes are off-perspective right now. The eyes need to follow the head and the hat's perspective.. take a close look at these two pics
you should probably see how the eyes are off by now