11-21-2010, 09:45 PM
No it's fine, I understand. Fakemon can be real complicated and I suck at them so I know it's not easy
The lizard might work, but it might be too busy. Like there might be too many flowery parts. I wouldn't worry too much about this one though.
Second one might work. A little confused about what the idea behind it is, but it's pretty nice.
Third one's been discussed. Idea's really random too, pokemon doesn't have random ideas
I'm not actually entirely sure what to say about the fourth one so I'll just skip it...!
Fifth one, that face would probably never happen (eyes especially), arms/hands aren't...geometrical enough, and it's generally too busy. Not sure if the sun (?) thing behind it is floating or what but it doesn't seem to fit that much. You might wanna consider moving it or making changes or something. I'm not really sure what the concept behind it is supposed to be, either (I guess to go with the moon one but I mean the animal and why?).
Sixth one, the face looks more any anime than pokemon, you might consider making the anatomy more zangoose-like (torso area might be too big? that causes a problem with the details though so I'm not sure), forehead mark might be unnecessary and stars on legs would probably not happen like that
Of course, when I said "I don't understand the concept here" it doesn't mean that concepts have to be immediately obvious, I just mean that there should be a reason why it is what it is so that's something to keep in mind
The lizard might work, but it might be too busy. Like there might be too many flowery parts. I wouldn't worry too much about this one though.
Second one might work. A little confused about what the idea behind it is, but it's pretty nice.
Third one's been discussed. Idea's really random too, pokemon doesn't have random ideas
I'm not actually entirely sure what to say about the fourth one so I'll just skip it...!
Fifth one, that face would probably never happen (eyes especially), arms/hands aren't...geometrical enough, and it's generally too busy. Not sure if the sun (?) thing behind it is floating or what but it doesn't seem to fit that much. You might wanna consider moving it or making changes or something. I'm not really sure what the concept behind it is supposed to be, either (I guess to go with the moon one but I mean the animal and why?).
Sixth one, the face looks more any anime than pokemon, you might consider making the anatomy more zangoose-like (torso area might be too big? that causes a problem with the details though so I'm not sure), forehead mark might be unnecessary and stars on legs would probably not happen like that
Of course, when I said "I don't understand the concept here" it doesn't mean that concepts have to be immediately obvious, I just mean that there should be a reason why it is what it is so that's something to keep in mind
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