Amitie

[Neoriceisgood]

Just a few general points that I notice at a first glance;

1# Her legs aren't sexy at all, they remind me of skinny man legs, is this intentional?

2# The general lightsource is very ambiguous, you could probably make it look better if you had a more ... intentional-looking set of shadows.

3# Her face reminds me a bit of a round blobby toad, it has a much more defined shape in the source material.

4# Her general bodyshape (the shirt part) is a lot blobbier and less defined than the source material as well.
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Things I like so far;

1# I think the arm that's pointing (shoulder to bracelet) looks pretty darn spot on, like the shaping, shading and everything; I don't think you should really change it at all anymore.

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Otherwise I'd like to ask, what are you trying to do with this piece? emulate the original style? do your own thing?

Right now it has a bit of a "generic fanart" feel to it, where you took the character, mildly copied it, half true to the source material half just seeing what it'll end up being, advice on what to do with it might vary depending on what your real intention for this piece is;

Did you do it to honour the character? To practice, to do something new?

explicitly thinking about purpose might help set a general direction.

Otherwise the piece is all fine and dandy, but I do feel it can be improved a lot.