11-22-2010, 06:28 PM
Chris, a dick? Of all the members I wouldn't have expected him to be the one someone would call that ahaha
I noticed you didn't change your colors, but the contrast is a really big problem so increase it. A lot. You also need to get rid of all the anti-aliasing on the outside, which isn't doing anything for your piece at all except making it worse. If anywhere needs anti-aliasing it's the -inside-, since the head is a little jagged. I don't like how the eyes are outlined in hard black while the outline of the head is lighter
I'd seriously fix these problems before trying to keep messing around with how the actual shades should be placed.
I noticed you didn't change your colors, but the contrast is a really big problem so increase it. A lot. You also need to get rid of all the anti-aliasing on the outside, which isn't doing anything for your piece at all except making it worse. If anywhere needs anti-aliasing it's the -inside-, since the head is a little jagged. I don't like how the eyes are outlined in hard black while the outline of the head is lighter
I'd seriously fix these problems before trying to keep messing around with how the actual shades should be placed.
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