11-28-2010, 10:44 AM
first of all, welcome to the forums! hope you find it a nice place.
think of wings as large hands with elongated fingers (because they are)
so
take a human hand, make the thumb the tip of the joint, extend the other fingers, and stretch the skin between them.
i know you're going for a stylized drawing, but right now the wings look like cardboard.
give the body some thickness, too, because it looks a bit weird and it won't support his head, heh.
think of wings as large hands with elongated fingers (because they are)
so
take a human hand, make the thumb the tip of the joint, extend the other fingers, and stretch the skin between them.
i know you're going for a stylized drawing, but right now the wings look like cardboard.
give the body some thickness, too, because it looks a bit weird and it won't support his head, heh.