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Hieros Gamos, Fakemon and More
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(11-16-2010, 08:44 PM)masquerain Wrote: [Image: dandelante.gif][Image: tarpit-2.gif][Image: decorababby.gif][Image: decora-1.gif]

For the first one, the design is slightly ambiguous, from what you've said it's a plant lizard hybrid; right now some of the flowers look like a cross between fur and petals, especially on the tail. That one is probably the biggest offender, you could benefit from defining some petals.

The second one has a cool design concept, but what is the light blue part supposed to be inspired by? It doesn't ring TAR PITS to me. Also, I can't think of anything off the top of my head, but it would be really neat if you could incorporate more of the "bones as accessory" theme to him. Take advantage of the different bone shapes to make him more interesting than just "blob". Maybe make shoulderpads out of skulls! (That one's kind of common, though...)

The problems I see with the koalas (?) is that I don't see the theme. After I read your post explaining what they were, I sort of see what's going on? For example, with Ganguro as a theme, ganguro girls remind me of reverse pandas, with dark skin and white outlines around the eyes. Unfortunately, I can't even tell what aspects from goth lolis you're using, so I can't really comment on that Sad

I really like the Jinn fakemon, but I think the second form (if it's the final form) could use something more. Right now it's mostly a buffer version of the pre-evolution with a magic lamp. Maybe you can add some armlets? Some mist clouds at the spout of the lamp would also be pretty rad.

I know someone who would definitely enjoy the Zepplock concept, heh. The face isn't oriented properly with respect to the body, although doing so would probably obscure the non-monocle eye. The hat (although it looks more like something that's actually from a blimp) is also improperly angled. Speaking of the monocle, it's very simplistic. Looking at some references on Google, I'd suggest adding the string that usually hangs from one (yeah, there's not really any place for it to go... but that shouldn't be a problem considering you're making a classy Zeppelin Tongue) You might want to try just making it a thin black circle, it seems a bit on the thick side at this resolution. The mustache is cute Smile

(Why yes, I am planning to design some fakemon myself... Smile)
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RE: Some Fakemon - by GrooveMan.exe - 11-16-2010, 08:47 PM
RE: Some Fakemon - by megaMasquerain - 11-16-2010, 08:52 PM
RE: Some Fakemon - by Neslug - 11-16-2010, 08:54 PM
RE: Some Fakemon - by Phantom Killah - 11-16-2010, 08:57 PM
RE: Some Fakemon - by megaMasquerain - 11-16-2010, 09:06 PM
RE: Some Fakemon - by Cobalt Blue - 11-16-2010, 10:12 PM
RE: Some Fakemon - by Proton - 11-16-2010, 10:36 PM
RE: Some Fakemon - by TomGuycott - 11-17-2010, 01:20 AM
RE: Some Fakemon - by brandman1996 - 11-17-2010, 05:35 PM
RE: Some Fakemon - by Keychain - 11-17-2010, 09:12 PM
RE: Some Fakemon - by megaMasquerain - 11-21-2010, 08:42 PM
RE: Some Fakemon - by StarSock64 - 11-21-2010, 08:58 PM
RE: Some Fakemon - by megaMasquerain - 11-21-2010, 09:06 PM
RE: Some Fakemon - by StarSock64 - 11-21-2010, 09:45 PM
RE: Some Fakemon - by megaMasquerain - 11-21-2010, 09:57 PM
RE: Some Fakemon - by Proton - 11-21-2010, 10:01 PM
RE: Some Fakemon - by megaMasquerain - 11-21-2010, 10:02 PM
RE: Some Fakemon - by Proton - 11-21-2010, 09:54 PM
RE: Some Fakemon - by StarSock64 - 11-21-2010, 10:08 PM
RE: Some Fakemon - by megaMasquerain - 11-30-2010, 04:53 PM
RE: Some Fakemon - by DioShiba - 11-30-2010, 09:58 PM
RE: Some Fakemon - by Alpha Six - 12-01-2010, 12:45 AM
RE: Some Fakemon - by Kitsu - 11-30-2010, 06:53 PM
RE: Some Fakemon - by Nindo - 11-30-2010, 07:05 PM
RE: Some Fakemon - by megaMasquerain - 12-01-2010, 06:43 PM
RE: Some Fakemon - by BynineB - 12-02-2010, 11:14 AM
RE: Some Fakemon - by Davy Jones - 12-04-2010, 02:45 PM
RE: Some Fakemon - by water dog - 12-04-2010, 03:43 PM
RE: Some Fakemon - by megaMasquerain - 12-04-2010, 09:29 PM
RE: Some Fakemon - by x0_000 - 12-04-2010, 10:01 PM
RE: Some Fakemon - by Vivvav - 12-05-2010, 11:21 AM
RE: Some Fakemon + Other stuff - by Delicious - 12-21-2010, 12:07 AM
RE: Some Fakemon + Other stuff - by x0_000 - 12-12-2010, 06:57 PM
RE: Some Fakemon + Other stuff - by Cobalt Blue - 12-12-2010, 08:23 PM
RE: Some Fakemon + Other stuff - by Cobalt Blue - 12-18-2010, 11:30 PM
RE: Some Fakemon + Other stuff - by Gwen - 12-19-2010, 01:43 PM
RE: Some Fakemon + Other stuff - by Gwen - 12-19-2010, 02:22 PM
RE: Some Fakemon + Other stuff - by water dog - 12-19-2010, 04:39 PM
RE: Some Fakemon + Other stuff - by Gwen - 12-19-2010, 05:43 PM
RE: Some Fakemon + Other stuff - by water dog - 12-20-2010, 03:31 PM
RE: Some Fakemon + Other stuff - by Gwen - 12-20-2010, 11:51 PM
RE: Creatures formerly known as Fakemon - by Gwen - 12-29-2010, 02:47 AM
RE: Creatures formerly known as Fakemon - by Gors - 01-02-2011, 08:05 PM
RE: Hieros Gamos, Fakemon and More - by x0_000 - 02-25-2011, 09:26 PM
RE: Hieros Gamos, Fakemon and More - by Gors - 03-12-2011, 03:08 PM
RE: Hieros Gamos, Fakemon and More - by Sengir - 03-12-2011, 03:08 PM
RE: Hieros Gamos, Fakemon and More - by Gors - 03-12-2011, 04:20 PM
RE: Hieros Gamos, Fakemon and More - by Gors - 03-12-2011, 10:42 PM
RE: Hieros Gamos, Fakemon and More - by Pidgeon - 03-20-2011, 11:02 PM
RE: Hieros Gamos, Fakemon and More - by Pidgeon - 03-20-2011, 11:32 PM
RE: Hieros Gamos, Fakemon and More - by Sengir - 04-12-2011, 11:05 PM

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