12-09-2010, 05:05 PM
Neslug: Nice! Something's a bit off with Oshawott, however. See, a lot of the time, with the GSC graphic style, if the Pokemon has two different colors that contrast pretty well, those two colors will usually be used. Thus, Oshawott, I think, would look much less like its in the Red/Blue shading style if you were to add the brown color there (even if it IS only on its nose), and possibly make the blue a bit less on the blue-violet side, rathermore more on the sky-blue side--but not TOO sky blue-like. Just less indigo.
Seiyoh: The only thing that bugs me is Weavile; it looks too compact and detailed for it to appear more as it's from GSC...instead, it looks a little more on the "edited sprite from a DS Pokemon game." See, if you notice, even with the more detailed Pokemon, the GSC style tended to simplify, if not "bubble-out" / exaggerate its anatomy. Your best bet is to use the GSC Sneasel as a reference.
Chaos Rush: While I'm not blatantly claiming that you just shrunk them and edited them, it really looks that way. Like I mentioned with seiyoh's Weavile, the anatomy of the Pokemon shouldn't be so exact. Exaggerate and / or SLIGHTLY deform things more.
BynineB: I'm pretty sure Magmortar was already done. But, nonetheless.
LDEJRuff: Oh my goodness. Okay, so you got the anatomy "freedom" concept down, I suppose, since some things are out of regular proportions, but I think you took that a little too far. Mostly, though, your problem are those god-awful jaggedy lines; especially on Azelf. Sorry I can't give you many pointers on that--there's just all these aspects of them that are so off that it would probably take quite a while to explain.
Seiyoh: The only thing that bugs me is Weavile; it looks too compact and detailed for it to appear more as it's from GSC...instead, it looks a little more on the "edited sprite from a DS Pokemon game." See, if you notice, even with the more detailed Pokemon, the GSC style tended to simplify, if not "bubble-out" / exaggerate its anatomy. Your best bet is to use the GSC Sneasel as a reference.
Chaos Rush: While I'm not blatantly claiming that you just shrunk them and edited them, it really looks that way. Like I mentioned with seiyoh's Weavile, the anatomy of the Pokemon shouldn't be so exact. Exaggerate and / or SLIGHTLY deform things more.
BynineB: I'm pretty sure Magmortar was already done. But, nonetheless.
LDEJRuff: Oh my goodness. Okay, so you got the anatomy "freedom" concept down, I suppose, since some things are out of regular proportions, but I think you took that a little too far. Mostly, though, your problem are those god-awful jaggedy lines; especially on Azelf. Sorry I can't give you many pointers on that--there's just all these aspects of them that are so off that it would probably take quite a while to explain.