12-10-2010, 09:43 PM
too much details, too low on contrast.
i'd work more on giving flynn and skeleton and actually work on his shoulders - the arms doesn't look conected at all to the rest of the body
as for the lineart, and specially the details, i'd go for something simpler, and then aadd some subtle details rather than try to stuff as much stuff as posible. try to play around with its shadows and how they would make the lights stand out more.
i'd work more on giving flynn and skeleton and actually work on his shoulders - the arms doesn't look conected at all to the rest of the body
as for the lineart, and specially the details, i'd go for something simpler, and then aadd some subtle details rather than try to stuff as much stuff as posible. try to play around with its shadows and how they would make the lights stand out more.