12-20-2010, 01:04 PM
Your lineart is really jagged, especially around the leaf. And it looks like you shaded this without realizing it's a round object. It needs depth. Your colors used for shading are also pretty bad.
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Help me fix my veggies! - by nicktheslayer - 12-20-2010, 12:13 PM
RE: Help me fix my veggies! - by Alpha Six - 12-20-2010, 01:04 PM
RE: Help me fix my veggies! - by nicktheslayer - 12-20-2010, 01:25 PM
RE: Help me fix my veggies! - by Baegal - 12-20-2010, 02:48 PM
RE: Help me fix my veggies! - by Chutzpar - 12-20-2010, 02:49 PM
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