12-26-2010, 07:06 AM
Wow I can see you really paid a lot of time reading the tutorial I linked and paying attention to it
which is precisely why none of the limbs are jointed, you haven't bothered to establish the ribcage and its depth, and you haven't drawn the pelvis in, or established any sort of form whatsoever.
Read the link. Read it thoroughly and actually do the exercises. Like I said before (and Fuchikoma's saying, too); it's not just about drawing in a skeleton, it's about drawing in a skeleton that actually informs your later drawing and makes sense. There's no point taking the extra time to draw stick figures if it isn't actually doing anything to make you think about structure. Hell, for all I know you drew out that sprite and then just overlaid the "skeleton" onto it, because you're not paying attention to what the skeleton is actually for.
which is precisely why none of the limbs are jointed, you haven't bothered to establish the ribcage and its depth, and you haven't drawn the pelvis in, or established any sort of form whatsoever.
Read the link. Read it thoroughly and actually do the exercises. Like I said before (and Fuchikoma's saying, too); it's not just about drawing in a skeleton, it's about drawing in a skeleton that actually informs your later drawing and makes sense. There's no point taking the extra time to draw stick figures if it isn't actually doing anything to make you think about structure. Hell, for all I know you drew out that sprite and then just overlaid the "skeleton" onto it, because you're not paying attention to what the skeleton is actually for.