12-28-2010, 02:36 PM
dwartle's shell is messy. fire homunculus doesn't look like fire, and you need more variation for danubine. think of transparency and blur for sylphen's tornado.
your colours are too pure, try and get a recurrent secondary colour/nuance in each of them, it'll make them more eye-catching and look less like toys.
keep trying!
your colours are too pure, try and get a recurrent secondary colour/nuance in each of them, it'll make them more eye-catching and look less like toys.
keep trying!