01-08-2011, 10:28 PM
Are you using references at all when you shade? Your lineart is fine, but your actual shading is flat and formless. Your color palettes are also bad.
Try putting characters on the stage to see how well they mesh together. If they don't, you have a problem and you need to fix it.
Try putting characters on the stage to see how well they mesh together. If they don't, you have a problem and you need to fix it.