I'm new and could you guys look at my sprites

[Proton]

It's obviously stiff, small to little movement of body.

The blurs are not blurs, but straight smears that look horrible.
And they're random,
like one arm blur has different colours than another one.


The effects are random as well.
They're not similar to Lucario in the slightest.
The teleport and combo look like you took a sphere and made a cut-out of it, making it just have colours, rather than shading.
The final smash charges dark purple, yet shoots cyan. wat.
The rocks in the Landing don't even look like they move,
and then they just disappear.
The effects you took from other sheets are assorted, which clashes the style altogether.

Which is why the sheet is on the shitty side,
and to top it off, it's barely an edit.

Needs a lot of work,
or scrap it.
Why scrap it?
Because making a new one would probably be better than trying to work with shit.

Cut down on the eccentric writing a little,
you may think it's fun or whatever, but it's more annoying than anything.

Shizzle! I forgot the url HURRRR stoopid me
http://img89.imageshack.us/i/lucariosmashbros.png/
sorry bout that guys
MEGA FACEPALM

The point.


As for the credit tag,

credits to the guy I borrowed the FX from

Smooth.