01-17-2011, 01:13 AM
sorry to break it for you but most of the edited if not all of the edited stuff is quite regular, if not far from decent. the shading in the first two rather than give volume and shape to the object makes them look beveled over a surface, and the edited parts of the sprite clash agaisnt what was original(asuming that the thread are what you didn't sprite)
the rest of what you posted suffers from a massive lack of contrast, rendering most of its readbility on a really low level.
however, i might warn you: this forum's purpose is to ask for feedback in works in process. while its ok to just introduce yourself by posting what you have done so far, you can't expect us to actually critique what seems to be finished(or asumed as). specially if these are mostly edits and splices.
of the whole lot the battery might be the only one that could be considered.
the rest of what you posted suffers from a massive lack of contrast, rendering most of its readbility on a really low level.
however, i might warn you: this forum's purpose is to ask for feedback in works in process. while its ok to just introduce yourself by posting what you have done so far, you can't expect us to actually critique what seems to be finished(or asumed as). specially if these are mostly edits and splices.
of the whole lot the battery might be the only one that could be considered.