01-17-2011, 03:41 AM
A lot of this could actually be reasonable submission material if you're willing to work on these more. Your lineart is fine, mostly (Though I dislike your Neowshadow. It's way too stiff and squat, compared to the more lanky acrobatic realisations in the games); your shading and colour palette need redoing. Which is entirely fine, and we can help with that.