01-20-2011, 07:21 PM
Looks pretty nice so far! You seem to have removed part of the hat on the top right? It seems a bit more unbalanced in the current version. I like the face shading in the old one compared to the new one. Some contrast to define facial features could be interesting, although I don't know what you're aiming for at the moment. Lastly is the black area at the bottom supposed to be a reference for his shoulders? It's pretty low if it is. That's about all I can say without the reference at the moment!