09-29-2008, 02:34 PM
My main complaint: Pillow shading (in quite a few of them) , shading contradiction (on the hair), unreal lighting(on the hair again).
Just for prevention, I am not criticizing the shape (it is unreal, but your character can have any kind of hair for all I care), but the shading and lighting; If you look at it, it looks flat, and overall bad. Maybe you should have some references? (I think there's a couple of characters with hair like that in Bobobo and Shaman King).
Just for prevention, I am not criticizing the shape (it is unreal, but your character can have any kind of hair for all I care), but the shading and lighting; If you look at it, it looks flat, and overall bad. Maybe you should have some references? (I think there's a couple of characters with hair like that in Bobobo and Shaman King).