When Fuchi said the torso is almost twice as long as the legs, he was probably referring to her arms, those suckers are LONG.
Imagine her animated, and she were to put her arms down into an idle state, they'd probably be down next to the knees, you gotta shorten em up a bit, also, the shoulders seem a little bit too broad. The shading in the previous sprite (around the shorts and waist) looked a little better as well.
Try and take care of these things first.
Imagine her animated, and she were to put her arms down into an idle state, they'd probably be down next to the knees, you gotta shorten em up a bit, also, the shoulders seem a little bit too broad. The shading in the previous sprite (around the shorts and waist) looked a little better as well.
Try and take care of these things first.